Patrick wrote > writers must continually monitor what someone else > wants, expects, and how with minimal effort (there are other courses, after > all) they might meet such expectations. I am sure all of us are aware of > such stances and the constraints they impose; and we try to work against > them. But I sense the institutional setting works against our best > intentions. I recall one of my colleagues who insisted that late papers > would be penalized. The "real world" has its norms. But surely, no one in > that world is expected to produce four or five major papers in more or less > the same period > Of course students must monitor what someone else wants -- that is considering audience after all. And of course, expedience is a factor -- that is human after all. I don't believe we can pull ourselves out of the "centre" of the writing exercise so long as 1. we are assigning it, and 2. we are evaluating. I think what the student is engaged in is a complex negotiation between themselves and us. When they fail at it, it is either because they have stayed entirely in their own circle -- ignored us -- or capitulated entirely to our authority -- ignored themselves. If they do the former, they will be frustrated because we don't "get it" (because they haven't given it TO us); if they do the latter they will be frustrated because they've "done what you asked". Yet they won't have done. What I think most of us ask for is that kind of engagement or urgency that Roberta noted. We want the negotiation, and in the process we expect our own ground to be shifted. You can look at this socio-cognitively, heck you can even go back to TS. Eliot and extrapolate from "Tradition and the Individual Talent", but that negotiation is part of the student's maturing. That maturing involves not only adopting the dominant discourse, but also resisting it and reshaping it to the student's own ends. Thereby, of course, the student will reshape that discourse to include him/herself. The more senior the student, that is the more deeply "in" the student is to the discourse the more likely they are to both accept the dominant discourse AND to reshape it. In this sense, I think the writing is real, very real. Whatever they write afterward, wherever they write it, will be influenced by their learning that they can shape a discourse community with their writing and thinking. Rob Irish -- ************************************** Dr. Robert Irish, Director Language Across the Curriculum Applied Science and Engineering University of Toronto SF B670 416.978.6708 http://www.ecf.utoronto.ca/~writing ************************************* -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- To leave the list, send a SIGNOFF CASLL command to [log in to unmask] or, if you experience difficulties, write to Russ Hunt at [log in to unmask] For the list archives and information about the organization, its newsletter, and the annual conference, go to http://www.stu.ca/inkshed/ -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-