HI Susan I think I would like to keep my metaphoric comparison mostly because a lot of (not all) academic writing resembles the Mac truck you describe. And the comparison works because there is a value in bike-- it just doesn't carry a lot of weight or go very far very fast. It means I can open up the discussion to what is of value in the 5 paragrapher. And even leaves some room to poke fun at some of the clunkier stuff in more expansive kind of academic writing. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Susan Drain" <[log in to unmask]> To: <[log in to unmask]> Sent: Friday, October 28, 2005 11:08 AM Subject: bicycles and Mac trucks > May I respectfully urge Cathy to reconsider her simile? :-) > > Seems to me that a Mac trucks is much more like a five-paragraph essay, > clunky, capable of running down and over anything in its path, and limited > in its cargo space to certain dimensions and capacity. And both have > certainly all the weight of capitalist commerce behind them. > > Bicycles by contrast are nimble and adaptive technologies, which come in > different formats depending on the purpose and terrain in which they are > used, and are highly responsive to both the rider and the environment. > > Hmm... > > Susan > > > > Susan Drain, PhD > Department of English > Mount Saint Vincent University > Halifax, NS Canada B3M 2J6 > 902 457 6220 > [log in to unmask] > > -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- > To leave the list, send a SIGNOFF CASLL command to > [log in to unmask] or, if you experience difficulties, > write to Russ Hunt at [log in to unmask] > > For the list archives and information about the organization, > its newsletter, and the annual conference, go to > http://www.stu.ca/inkshed/ > -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- > -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- To leave the list, send a SIGNOFF CASLL command to [log in to unmask] or, if you experience difficulties, write to Russ Hunt at [log in to unmask] For the list archives and information about the organization, its newsletter, and the annual conference, go to http://www.stu.ca/inkshed/ -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-