Reading the excerpts of last fall's discussion of legal writing reminds me that I meant to pass along two references: Goldfarb, Ronald L. and James C. Raymond, CLEAR UNDERSTANDINGS: A GUIDE TO LEGAL WRITING. Tuscaloosa, AL: Goldenray, 1982. [Perhaps there is a more recent edition as this is a very popular book; Jim Raymond has spent a lot of time teaching Canadian judges, by the way.] Perrin, Timothy. BETTER WRITING FOR LAWYERS. Toronto: Law Society of Upper Canada, 1990. This one is written by a lawyer who took Anne Hungerford's advanced writing course and read both her text and mine--and them applied what he had learned to what he knew about legal writing. [Technically, some parts of it are probably plagiared, but then imitation is said to be the sincerest form of flattery. Let me add that I think there are two aspects to teaching lawyers how to write, only one of which the law schools care much about. The first is teaching law students to enter the discourse community of lawyers, i.e., to write for lawyers and judges as lawyers and judges wish to be written to. The second, often associated with the 'plain language' movement, is teaching lawyers (and would-be lawyers) how to write about legal matters for ordinary folks (i.e., for those outside the discourse community of the law). Morally and politically, I'm not sure it is right to teach only the first. So let me add another reference (at least): PROCEEDINGS: JUST LANGUAGE CONFERENCE (Vancouver), 1992. [This includes a very interesting piece by Angus Reid, "Who is Readying Anyway? A Psychographic Profile of Canadians," which should be of considerable interest to all CASLL teachers of reading/writing, I think.] With some luck, most Canadian university libraries should have this.