Here is another bit of nonsense from my favorite librarian. Even Jefferson might have had trouble with the Udall bill. George Andes 62/14 and still counting --------------- Forwarded Message --------------- From: Janet Shainheit, INTERNET:[log in to unmask] To: George M. Andes, 103075,1020 Date: Thu, Oct 10, 1996, 8:24 AM RE: Re: Bad Humor Sender: [log in to unmask] Received: from dutch.worc-acad.pvt.k12.ma.us (dutch.worc-acad.pvt.k12.ma.us [146.115.204.3]) by hil-img-3.compuserve.com (8.6.10/5.950515) id IAA02163; Thu, 10 Oct 1996 08:14:22 -0400 Received: from [146.115.204.73] by dutch.worc-acad.pvt.k12.ma.us with SMTP (Apple Internet Mail Server 1.1.1); Thu, 10 Oct 1996 08:12:23 -0400 Message-Id: <v01530501ae8261bb0d1b@[146.115.204.73]> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" To: [log in to unmask] From: [log in to unmask] (Janet Shainheit) Subject: Re: Bad Humor Date: Thu, 10 Oct 1996 08:12:23 -0400 >Received your e-mail. Will write soon. > >In the meantime: > >Date: Mon, 7 Oct 1996 13:13:57 -0700 >From: [log in to unmask] > > Bad Humor Club > > > > The Court of King George III > London, England > > > July 10, 1776 > > >Mr. Thomas Jefferson >c/o The Continental Congress >Philadelphia, Pennsylvania > > >Dear Mr. Jefferson: > >We have read your "Declaration of Independence" with great >interest. Certainly, it represents a considerable >undertaking, and many of your statements do merit serious >consideration. Unfortunately, the Declaration as a whole >fails to meet recently adopted specifications for proposals >to the Crown, so we must return the document to you for >further refinement. The questions which follow might assist >you in your process of revision: > >1. In your opening paragraph you use the phrase "the Laws >of Nature and Nature's God." What are these laws? In what >way are they the criteria on which you base your central >arguments? Please document with citations from the recent >literature. > >2. In the same paragraph you refer to the "opinions of >mankind." Whose polling data are you using? Without >specific evidence, it seems to us the "opinions of mankind" >are a matter of opinion. > >3. You hold certain truths to be "self-evident." Could you >please elaborate. If they are as evident as you claim then >it should not be difficult for you to locate the appropriate >supporting statistics. > >4. "Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of happiness" seem to be >the goals of your proposal. These are not measurable goals. >If you were to say that "among these is the ability to >sustain an average life expectancy in six of the 13 >colonies of at last 55 years, and to enable newspapers in >the colonies to print news without outside interference, and >to raise the average income of the colonists by 10 percent >in the next 10 years," these could be measurable goals. >Please clarify. > >5. You state that "Whenever any Form of Government becomes >destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to >alter or to abolish it, and to institute a new >Government...." Have you weighed this assertion against >all the alternatives? What are the trade-off >considerations? > >6. Your description of the existing situation is quite >extensive. Such a long list of grievances should precede >the statement of goals, not allow it. Your problem >statement needs improvement. > >7. Your strategy for achieving your goal is not developed >at all. You state that the colonies "ought to be Free and >Independent States," and that they are "Absolved from All >Allegiance to the British Crown." > >Who or what must change to achieve this objective? In what >way must they change? What specific steps will you take to >overcome the resistance? How long will it take? We have >found that a little foresight in these areas helps to >prevent careless errors later on. > >How cost-effective are your strategies? > >8. Who among the list of signatories will be responsible >for implementing your strategy? Who conceived it? Who >provided the theoretical research? Who will constitute the >advisory committee? > >Please submit an organization chart and vitas of the >principal investigators. > >9. You must include an evaluation design. We have been >requiring this since Queen Anne's War. > >10. What impact will your problem have? Your failure to >include any assessment of this inspires little confidence in >the long-range prospects of your undertaking. > >11. Please submit a PERT diagram, an activity chart, >itemised budget, and manpower utilization matrix. > >We hope that these comments prove useful in revising your >"Declaration of Independence." We welcome the submission of >your revised proposal. Our due date for unsolicited >proposals is July 31, 1776. Ten copies with original >signatures will be required. > >Sincerely, > > > > >Management Analyst to the British Crown > >=======================================================================>The >Bad Humor Club is a moderated mailing list managed by Rivendell >Technologies, Inc. To join send email to "[log in to unmask]". >The moderator will discard any tasteless, overly prejudiced or insulting >submissions. In other words, it is only what the moderator finds funny. > > > > >******************************** >Constance Finlay * >Information Specialist * >CORNELL UNIVERSITY * >New York State School of * >Industrial and Labor Relations * >232 Ives Hall * >Ithaca, NY 14853-3901 * > * >Telephone: (607) 255-2184 * >Facsimile: (607)255-9641 * >E-Mail: [log in to unmask] * >URL:http://www.ilr.cornell.edu * >********************************* Janet A. Shainheit, Librarian Worcester Academy 81 Providence Street Worcester, MA 01604 508-754-5302 ext.127 [log in to unmask]