Here is another bit of nonsense from my favorite librarian.  Even Jefferson
might have had trouble with the Udall bill.


George Andes
62/14 and still counting

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>Received your e-mail. Will write soon.
>
>In the meantime:
>
>Date: Mon, 7 Oct 1996 13:13:57 -0700
>From: [log in to unmask]
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>                          Bad Humor Club
>
>
>
>                                The Court of King George III
>                                             London, England
>
>
>                                               July 10, 1776
>
>
>Mr. Thomas Jefferson
>c/o The Continental Congress
>Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
>
>
>Dear Mr. Jefferson:
>
>We have read your "Declaration of Independence" with great
>interest.  Certainly,  it represents a considerable
>undertaking, and many of your statements do merit  serious
>consideration.  Unfortunately, the Declaration as a whole
>fails to meet recently adopted specifications for proposals
>to the Crown, so we must return the document to you for
>further refinement. The questions which follow might assist
>you in your process of revision:
>
>1.  In your opening paragraph you use the phrase "the Laws
>of Nature and Nature's God."  What are these laws?  In what
>way are they the criteria on which you base your central
>arguments?  Please document with citations from the recent
>literature.
>
>2.  In the same paragraph you refer to the "opinions of
>mankind."  Whose polling data are you using?  Without
>specific evidence, it seems to us the "opinions of mankind"
>are a matter of opinion.
>
>3.  You hold certain truths to be "self-evident."  Could you
>please elaborate.  If they are as evident as you claim then
>it should not be difficult for you to locate the appropriate
>supporting statistics.
>
>4.  "Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of happiness" seem to be
>the goals of your proposal.  These are not measurable goals.
>If you were to say that "among these is the ability to
>sustain an average life  expectancy in six of the 13
>colonies of at last 55 years, and to enable newspapers in
>the colonies to print news without outside interference, and
>to raise the average income of the colonists by 10  percent
>in the next 10 years," these could be measurable goals.
>Please clarify.
>
>5.  You state that "Whenever any Form of Government becomes
>destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to
>alter or to abolish it, and to institute a new
>Government...."  Have you  weighed this assertion against
>all the alternatives?  What are the trade-off
>considerations?
>
>6.  Your description of the existing situation is quite
>extensive.  Such a long list of grievances should precede
>the statement of goals, not allow it.  Your problem
>statement needs improvement.
>
>7.  Your strategy for achieving your goal is not developed
>at all.  You state that the colonies "ought to be Free and
>Independent States," and that they are "Absolved from All
>Allegiance to the British Crown."
>
>Who or what must change to achieve this objective?  In what
>way must they change?  What specific steps will you take to
>overcome the resistance? How long will it take?  We have
>found that a little foresight in these areas helps to
>prevent careless errors later on.
>
>How cost-effective are your strategies?
>
>8.  Who among the list of signatories will be responsible
>for implementing your strategy?  Who conceived it?  Who
>provided the theoretical research? Who will constitute the
>advisory committee?
>
>Please submit an organization chart and vitas of the
>principal investigators.
>
>9.  You must include an evaluation design.  We have been
>requiring this since Queen Anne's War.
>
>10. What impact will your problem have?  Your failure to
>include any assessment of this inspires little confidence in
>the long-range prospects of your undertaking.
>
>11. Please submit a PERT diagram, an activity chart,
>itemised budget, and manpower utilization matrix.
>
>We hope that these comments prove useful in revising your
>"Declaration of Independence."  We welcome the submission of
>your revised proposal.  Our due date for unsolicited
>proposals is July 31, 1776.  Ten copies with original
>signatures will be required.
>
>Sincerely,
>
>
>
>
>Management Analyst to the British Crown
>
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